For Writing we have been working with a partner or independently to create a Pick-A-Path. I chose to do mine on a mission. I tried my very best to keep the main character gender neutral, so I haven't put any strictly female or male descriptions in there. If you notice any please tell me so I may change them.
Hope you enjoy my slide.
Amazing writing. That has inspired me and Zoe's writing a lot. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteWow Derrin and I thought mine was ok! I really like your choice of words. You should write a sequel! I now have lots of inspiration for my writing!!!!
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Great Job Derrin! Amazing writing, certinatly inspired Te-Kira and I
ReplyDeleteWOW! Derrin that's amazing. You should really write another book. I just have a question, is the person a good guy or a bad guy?
ReplyDeleteWOW! That was soooooo amazing Derrin! It was really clear that yo were on a mission and in the end you were in trouble. Well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat Derrin! That was really good. I like your descriptive words. Maybe you could make another one and finish your story on how she fixed her mess?
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